David Flowers

Narrative Account

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Here’s my comments page. Feel free to write whatever you want.

 

David,

         This is a great narrative account!  Your writing style is great, and you have a good vocabulary!  You should watch out for your verb tenses, because you change them around sometimes.  I really enjoyed reading this, and I think you had some really great reflections on your work!  Nice job!

                 -Ms. Kelleher

David,

          I really like your story, it sounded so original but I think that you should of put a picture on your reflection page so it would of look more original from what it is now                     Marisol Hernandez

          Nice it is very good the super hero thing is great but there is a lot super heroes in the world.

                Peter                                                                                                                      

       Cool pic  I like how u choose your story                                                                 

Eryck 

David

your story was good it might be the best one there.

                                                      Ramadan

 

 

 

 

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