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Narrative Account |
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Steven Cosme |
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This is the city where Max’s brother almost died. Along with him…….
along with him alalong |
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Max’s Journal |
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November19, 1842 Today I discovered that I have a brother. I was shocked when I found out that I had a brother. I mean I had a brother and never knew about him. What if he was someone I knew or hated. I can’t hate my own brother its just not right. Maybe it was one of the people I made their lives a living hell. Tomorrow I’ll hire a bunch of people and send them on a quest, a quest to find my brother. I will also hire people to find more information on my brother. None of that crap they gave me “sir according to your mothers records we found out that an year later after your mother gave birth to you she had an other baby”. NO! I need more than that. Max Johnson November29, 1842 I couldn’t believe it was the man I hated all my life. The second I saw him I froze. I pretended I cared for him all my life, I don't think he bought it. I gave him a room in my mansion. I own the biggest mansion in the whole world. When my brother walked in behind him was his wife. I don’t know why when I looked at her she looked like if she wanted to take over and land to. So I gave them the second biggest room. Something about my brother’s wife told me to keep an eye out on her just in case. After a while when they finally settled in she acted different around me than with Jim, my brother. First I thought it was because I was rice. I tried to keep away from her but the more I tried the more it backfired. Max Johnson November21, 1842 Today I had to go to work. I have four jobs one is selling cars another is selling beautiful art work and my last job is being a policeman. So I can drive my private jet or I can get someone to fly it for me. I go all over the world taking people to where I’m ordered to go. But the planes I drive and take people are not my planes. Oh I almost forgot I own a rich hotel. The job I hate the most is selling cars. There's this guy that works there too. His name is John something, I don’t know his last name. He thinks he’s better than me just because he gets paid more than me. But I don’t care really care because I’m loaded withy $cash$, I’m rich! But it still gets me mad. Sometimes I just feel like I want to take a knife and kill him. I just wish something really bad could happen to him. If I ever sold more cars than him at the end of the year he would tell the boss I was selling cars at a very low price like 300 dollars. The boss Mr. Johnson, yes my dad. He likes to sell cars in a high price. Sometimes I want to quit but he pays me good. Max Johnson November22, 1842 I hated today, my mom was yelling at me all day because of Jim. It was like as if I was a teenager again, but this time my brother was the one casing all the problems. Also I already knew I had a brother. I would get blamed for his actions. I started to get mad and said so what! It’s my house you don’t yell at me when a window breaks or a glass cup falls and breaks into pieces. I bought all these things with my money. My money that I earned! That was my new conflict for now on, my brother. My mom started to yell at the top of her lungs as if there was an earthquake and she was about to die. I was afraid that she will kick me out of my mansion. I didn’t care it wasn’t the first time my mom kicked my out this would be like the 21st time I would be along or live in an old broke down hand made house. Believe it or not I used to be dirt poor. When I was poor my conflict was school. Every day was hell at school. I would be the easiest that would fall down and burn to ashes. Max Johnson November25, 1842 It’s 12:58 and all I could think about is how would my land look like in the future. I got up and started thinking what if I could go to the future right now. What if I could make a time machine and visit the future. But how am I going to build it? Max Johnson November26, 1842 It’s was 11:32 and I was ready to build that time machine. I hire eight scientists to help me out. At first I thought it was hopeless because we were not doing anything but talking and planning who to build it. I was getting angry just for waiting. Max Johnson December5, 1842 I couldn’t believe it, it was finished. My time traveling machine was finished. Now my life was complete. Well not yet tomorrow when I go to the future, then my life would be complete. The only thing I am taking is my journal an my camera. Max Johnson January3, 2705 I can’t believe it am really in the future. Right now it’s January3, 2705. My birthday is in five days. Once I got here I saw that everyone looked different and dressed different too. I was scared at first but then some people started to give me future money and said things like look at that poor man, who could someone like without a home, he needs a home, poor man if one you finished school and you should've finished collage. I wondered what is collage? As I looked around I saw some weird looking things people called cars. And when I would look up I would see these small things flying every where. First I was afraid of them into a lot of people kept on telling me “Man shout up there just plans”. They got me to shout up by taking me to there main source, it was called an airport. Max Johnson January4, 2705 Four more days into my birthday. I kept telling myself. Then I went to the city and explored the future. I went on to get this job that people told me to get. I didn’t like stores because the people inside wouldn’t even let me in. When I just walk inside these people wearing the same cloths came and told me to leave the building. Oh well I just try tomorrow. Max Johnson January5, 2705 It was ten thirty-five when I wake up. I decided not to go look for this job. It was just a waste of my time. A got one of these cars to stop and that my to Maxinton my old land. The man inside told me it wasn’t Maxinton anymore and they renamed it. And now its called……. Max Johnson January6, 2705 One more day into my birthday! Well at lest I tried to be happy. All I could think about was about my land and what it turned into. I was so confused I didn’t understand anything. The man said we would get to my future land. Man I just wish I could go home. WAIT A MINITE how the **** am I going to get back to my time. I can’t stay here! Max Johnson January7,
2705 It’s
my birthday and I can’t even be happy. I was depressed all I could do was
wait for a miracle to happen. All I wanted to do at that point was to die.
Die in pain just sitting there waiting to die. Nothing to do nothing eat
nothing to live for. I couldn’t even try to be happy why should I continue to
live, to go through more pain. While the car was still moving I quickly
jumped out and landed in a branch with needles growing out of them. I
kept on telling myself am so stupid why didn’t I stop myself from coming to
the future. I knew I was missing something but didn’t know what. Well at lest
I know it now. I couldn’t believe what was happing to me. It was to long for
me to die, and am to young to die anyways. Well if I can’t die then I’ll just
have to be hanged. Max
Johnson January9, 2705 Today I was living in heaven. It turns out that there was a document that said “in this town we would always respect my older brother Max Johnson who never came back from the future. Hopefully he would come back some day. He would always be in Jimston’s heart”. Max Johnson January10, 2705 It not fair why does everything go wrong when ever something good happens in my life. 11:52pm I am hidden from my brothers wife. It turns out she was really the devil. But then I thought about it I laughed and laughed. It was discussing that would mean my brother married the devils wife of the devil himself. I couldn’t stop thinking about it. The villager were all screaming at me saying stop acting like a baby. The she-devil destroyed every thing. What scared me the most was when she just rose from the dead. The first words she said was “I've been waiting foe you. For years I been trapped in hell waiting into the mighty Maxinton to come back. You must join me, we will set to bring hell back up so we could rule. I said no and ran. Max Johnson January11, 2705 Tomorrow I will fight the devil. Hopefully I will win and stop this madness. Tomorrow I will be risking my life for these people or I could steel one of these fancy time machines and go back to my time see how all this happened and hide for the rest of my life let the people from the future died or fix all this. Max Johnson January12, 2705 I an such a cowered, I can’t believe I ran just like that. I let all those people down. Right now they might be lining up to fall in hell. Well tomorrow I try to do some thing. Once everybody died I got a ride and went to New York its on the other side of the country. I also got this future thing it writes for me. I just say what ever I want it to write in my journal. So right now am just talking. Max Johnson January23, 2705 My brother is in the future with me right next to me. Were going to fight the she-devil as soon as we get to the town. Also I installed this chip in my journal that writes what ever is happing right now. Its 3:24am, Max and Jim are fighting and with there new and improved magic powers that god gave them. Jim is knocked out and it is all up to Max to end this fight. Max Johnson January25, 2705 Jim is dieing and Max is all out of energy. She-devil still has all her energy and is about to kill Max. No! Jim screamed out and a giant white light is flashing every where. Jim is Sacrificing his life to save the town and sent the she devil by to hell where she and her husband belong. Later that night Everyone is happy again, Jim is dead and his sprit’s in heaven both devils are in hell. Hell didn’t rise and the man devil never got to rise in earth. Everyone is dancing and laughing. The bad news is Max is getting executed so Jim and he would be the gods of Jimston. Max Johnson
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