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Narrative Account |
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Steven Cosme |
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A picture of the future city that Max got sent to. |
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Reflections Page |
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Phone: 555-555-5555 |
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About the assignment I like that we got to make our own person and make their personal feelings. I put so many things that happened in my life in the story. Like when I get blamed for the things he did.
I think that the assignment was a good chance to express your feelings on another person.
I think I could've put more action in it or interesting. Also I should have placed some love relationship so the man could save his women.
I think I made the beginning too boring. I should’ve started it with some interesting events. |
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